Friday, October 24, 2014

My Narrative writing

Dear Reader,

This is my personal narrative. I hope you enjoy!






Father’s Day
“Hey mom, can I go out and play with Jackie?” I said hopefully.
“No Sami,” she said as she was cramming all the dishes in the dishwasher.
“...” I went to my dad, my last resort, “Happy father’s day daddy! Can I go outside?”
“Sure honey…!”
When I got outside the garbage smelled of banana peels, foot odor, and a hobo. As I was running to Jackie’s house, I tripped on a crack in the sidewalk! My mind went blurry, and my hands were aching from the sturdy sidewalk. My knee felt like it fell from a 4 ft building and landed in a lake full of alligator’s.
“OUCH! OUCH!” I screamed as blood was dripping down my knee. My cut burned as my tears hit it. I tried to stop crying but I couldn’t.
When I finally got inside, My hands were covered in blood, and I was crying so hard. My vision was so blurry from all the tears. I couldn’t see a thing.
          “Mommy, can you come clean my cut up?” I asked with a whimper in my voice.
“No honey, I’m busy,” she said not even looking at me.
“Please i’m bleeding!”
       “No, honey not right now. Go ask your dad,”
        “Sis i’ll help you clean yourself up,” dad said. He got up, paused his game, and went into the bathroom with me. I had a headache was I as walking into the bathroom and I didn’t feel good either.
 “Whoa! you really hurt yourself! Ange, can you get the alcohol so I can clean up Sis’s ...large cut?” my dad yelled from the bathroom.
“I’m busy making dinner, and I have to help seamus and I have to do the dishes!”
“Ugh, hang here, I’ll go get the alcohol, and the cotton balls,”
A few minutes later, he got back, and he cleaned me up.
       “Wanna come play with me?”
“Sure!”
“Dinner is ready! And all the dishes are clean!” Mom said as she brought the last of the toppings to the table, “We’re having hotdogs!”
“HOTDOGS!”
After dinner, I went to go play with my dad. Playing with him was so fun! As I was playing, I thought about all the times my dad was there for me, when he picked me up at the bus stop when mom wasn’t there, when he wanted to play with me, when he helped me with my homework. I knew he was always gonna be there for me.
“Happy father’s day daddy,”
“Thank you sis,” he said with a smile.



The End


Dedicated to my father for all his love. I know he’s always gonna make an effort. He’s always there for me when I need him.
-Samantha